Mastering Show, Don't Tell
Written And Tutored By Esther Chilton
Suitable for all levels of writers including beginners
Since joining The Writers Bureau as a student in 1999, and following their advice, Esther hasn’t looked back. As well as winning several writing competitions herself, she was head judge of Writers’ Forum magazine’s monthly short story competition. Over the years, Esther has regularly had articles and short stories published in a variety of newspapers and magazines in the UK and abroad. She has published a range of writing workbooks, children’s books and short story collections.
Esther became a tutor for The Writers Bureau in 2009 and when they closed in July 2026, she knew she wasn’t ready for it to go. Fortunately, they let her continue with the website and new courses so she can support students on their writing journey.
Another very useful enjoyable course from The Writers Bureau. It has certainly made me aware and understand the value of Show, don't tell. I thoroughly enjoy...
Read MoreAnother very useful enjoyable course from The Writers Bureau. It has certainly made me aware and understand the value of Show, don't tell. I thoroughly enjoyed it. The course also has the added information about how to present your work, which although I had done in the comprehensive course, was a much needed reminder. Thank youEsther for your direction and comments.
Read LessI loved the course. It was easy to follow and understand. No difficulty in understanding the course materials. It help me be aware of my action, dialogue, th...
Read MoreI loved the course. It was easy to follow and understand. No difficulty in understanding the course materials. It help me be aware of my action, dialogue, thoughts etc in using the five senses. It has given me a grounding in the Show Don't Tell techniques. Thank you. A great course.
Read LessBrillant course and very useful
Brillant course and very useful
Read LessMastering Show, Don't Tell opens the doorway to better writing in a short, concise, package. It focuses on opening up our abilities to build engagement, and ...
Read MoreMastering Show, Don't Tell opens the doorway to better writing in a short, concise, package. It focuses on opening up our abilities to build engagement, and interest, in our writing while cautioning about the overuse of the outlined techniques. A little gem.
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Module One - The Difference Between 'Showing' And 'Telling': a lack of tension, examples, tip, exercise one, some telling is OK, the pros and cons of showing and telling, exercis two.
Assignment One
Module Two - Tools To Show: action, exercise one, dialogue, exercise two, thoughts, exercise three, the senses, exercise four, final points to remember.
Assignment Two
Supplement - How To Present Your Typescript: paragraphing styles, layout of your emailed typescript, email subject headers, layout of your printed typescript, cover sheets, pseudonyms, word counts, photographs, covering letters and emails, summary.
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